Wow.

That was amazing.

It really looks like an entry for a film or animation festival... the music was fantastic, and I wasn't expecting it to be Clock-related at all, but the way you incorporated StrawberryClock into the story (which stood quite well on its own!) was also very creative. This is a story beautifully told. Excellent job!

Not a bad movie.

The movie was shot decently and overall wasn't bad, but personally, I had a few problems with it: first of all, your opening/closing music is extremely overused, so I'd advise you to find another piece of similar mood. Second of all, the violence wasn't particularly believable... generally a father/daughter abusive relationship wouldn't necessarily be limited to slaps in the face; harder blows would probably be both more impulsive and more effective, although granted softer blows wouldn't leave marks or bruises that would resurface later in the film.

The last major problem I found with it is it isn't really that much of a Flash animation. As you're aware, it's a video compressed and imported into Flash. Thus most of the work done was in filming the movie, not animating or scripting it. YouTube would probably be a more appropriate venue for short films of this type.

Great!

Nice intro, good sound, and when I lost I nearly had a heart attack. :D

It's not bad, but...

I'm voting to blam it.

Sorry. It really isn't bad, but look. Don't submit it if you're going to save half the tutorial for "1.0." ...The music was also kind of annoying...

I hope to see 1.0. It seems interesting enough as it is--especially the bit about shading. You may want to reorganize it a little so as to tell people what they're about to draw... other than what's mentioned above, you did a fine job.

Nice.

I have only one recommendation -- the sound's at a really high volume. But don't change the beat. That actually helped me. :D

w00t!

"emo shit" is the understatement of the minute.

Solid.